the west hills fog rolls
over waking mind
sweet into autumn
calm perspective held innate
gift of northern hemisphere
the yearly journey takes breath
hiding beneath leaves
rain dampens the light
sky clears brisk and bright
Under the sunshine or in the fog: I am a lover, a writer, an editor, a cook, a humanitarian and a photographer.
dreams, Letters, October poetry session, Poetry, writing
Autumn, Fall, Haiku, leaves, October, OctPoWriMo, poerty, rain
October 1, 2015 at 11:51 pm
This has meditative qualities…very calming…I like it. I do wish I had your Autumn…mine’s coming in far too warm thus far. Happy poeting! 🙂
October 4, 2015 at 2:14 pm
Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate that you wrote. I wish your fall to cool and trees to shift soon.
October 2, 2015 at 1:18 am
I like the vivid details of your words – particularly enjoyed the image of rain hiding beneath leaves…
October 2, 2015 at 7:38 am
Thank you so much for your feedback. Not a true haiku, but playing around with form is fun. Happy October and writing to you.
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Some things are more important than time ... cats are one of them. Welcome to a world of photographed shadows--I invite you to a study of compassion through poetry. It is with gratitude that you might take it with you.
No one but Night, with tears on her dark face,
Watches beside me in this windy place.
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